Sunday, February 19, 2017

Jeff Skewes #7 Empty amended



Eternity

Meets

Peace

Through

You





Image: Coming detail 1  synthetic polymer paint on stretched canvas - jskewes

3 comments:

  1. Small as it is what could could possibly go wrong?
    I wonder about its sequence following the previous #6 'Prelude' piece.
    Given the 'journey' I don't want to lose momentum
    and could this be 'two steps forward one back' or worse?

    My idea was - I wanted to proceed on an empty tank so
    Empty by its nature is....

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  2. The image is exquisite, Jeffree and I love the poem too - I can’t see anything wrong, though I’m not 100% sure about the word empty at the end. It might be better omitted altogether since you’ve already got the acrostic.

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    1. Oh yes how now the obvious, does glare its stare.
      In a quest for some perhaps smart design, repetition weakened the character.
      Thank you Magdalena (;

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