Pay
your Bills
never think the murderer a rare bird needing rifle sight
to spy there is one on every corner at the elbow
on the barstool convenience the
mantra of the money
of the times sing out elite law
makers make them
free it cannot just be me
Chilling and powerful. This seems quite finished to me. The striking rhyme at the end of poem works really well, particularly through in the free form structure.
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