Project 52 Project 52 is a weekly blog activity in 2017. It derives from 2016's Project 366 (aka Project365+1). Its purpose is to provide an on-line community of practice for poets and artists who wish – over the year – to develop materials for publication, exhibition or performance.
Wednesday, February 1, 2017
Kit Kelen - for a field guide to Australian clouds - reading the minds of clouds
reading the minds of clouds
at first ghosts were the only white people
then trousers and everyone could be painted
white – washed up or bandaged
sheets could be hung on a line
a purest flag to fly so seeming
a few stray lines
blew in from another work
fleece of the dream you could say
(how to read it?)
the sun new every day
and hello clouds, this is country
each shape symbolic of the fight with pillows
air beyond air
past death
the forest of streets
and leading there
see where the poet
cast a bridge into cloud
like a ladder lain flat
and the town turned into traffic
and the cars climbed like this
see where the smog drifted down
and we lay
the smoke will never wake you
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I love the humour, the fantasy, the thread of harsh reality that runs through and inside all this! It's both refreshing and "anxiogenic", it's both funny and worrying, and in the end striking!
ReplyDeleteYes, I think this one seems quite finished - I wouldn’t change anything. Very powerful and subtle at the same time.
ReplyDeleteSo lucid these cloud poems, so many images to like... especially a ladder cast flat and m.more...
ReplyDeleteHow about 'fleece of the dream' line just in italics? (what great line and idea :)