Project 52
Project 52 is a weekly blog activity in 2017. It derives from 2016's Project 366 (aka Project365+1). Its purpose is to provide an on-line community of practice for poets and artists who wish – over the year – to develop materials for publication, exhibition or performance.
Small as it is what could could possibly go wrong? I wonder about its sequence following the previous #6 'Prelude' piece. Given the 'journey' I don't want to lose momentum and could this be 'two steps forward one back' or worse?
My idea was - I wanted to proceed on an empty tank so Empty by its nature is....
The image is exquisite, Jeffree and I love the poem too - I can’t see anything wrong, though I’m not 100% sure about the word empty at the end. It might be better omitted altogether since you’ve already got the acrostic.
Small as it is what could could possibly go wrong?
ReplyDeleteI wonder about its sequence following the previous #6 'Prelude' piece.
Given the 'journey' I don't want to lose momentum
and could this be 'two steps forward one back' or worse?
My idea was - I wanted to proceed on an empty tank so
Empty by its nature is....
The image is exquisite, Jeffree and I love the poem too - I can’t see anything wrong, though I’m not 100% sure about the word empty at the end. It might be better omitted altogether since you’ve already got the acrostic.
ReplyDeleteOh yes how now the obvious, does glare its stare.
DeleteIn a quest for some perhaps smart design, repetition weakened the character.
Thank you Magdalena (;