Friday, March 10, 2017

Kerri Shying R - #18 Crime Lords

Crime lords

i. arresting

stepping over the hedge  the undercovers came  guns pointing forward
the high step took away from the long charge across the car park

I could see the child’s face as his hot chips went flying
pulled out of Dad’s car   and run run run to safety

or not safety but all that depends on where you stand where your eyes
are   on the day and all the days depending  


  1. Yep, it is the series leading through another sequence of life. I am clearing my decks for the big push. Eww, that sounds icky.

  2. Compelling sequences Kerri so well. Action packed in such a short work. I like it and await the next scene.

  3. I agree with Kit, great title! You managed to show a scene with words exactly the way a camera would have, good job! and whether icky or not, I'm looking forward to the next step!