Crime
lords
i. arresting
stepping over the hedge the undercovers came guns pointing forward
the high step took away from the long
charge across the car park
I could see the child’s face as his hot
chips went flying
pulled out of Dad’s car and run run run to safety
or not safety but all that depends on where
you stand where your eyes
are on the day and all the days depending
great title, great idea
ReplyDeleteYep, it is the series leading through another sequence of life. I am clearing my decks for the big push. Eww, that sounds icky.
ReplyDeleteCompelling sequences Kerri ...works so well. Action packed in such a short work. I like it and await the next scene.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Kit, great title! You managed to show a scene with words exactly the way a camera would have, good job! and whether icky or not, I'm looking forward to the next step!
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