Saturday, April 1, 2017

Kit Kelen - signature - for godsbother


signature

I fell into child’s writing
traveled that way
backwards
clumsy loop for loop
back to the teeth
to the tongue
and before

shore scribing
of the sea
I followed
the sandpiper’s course
and insects
under bark

something the wind wrote
some sign among stars
I can’t remember now

2 comments:

  1. A very visceral poem. Really like the way it moves simultaneously inward, and backwards.

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  2. A super tempo that comes to it's finale quick and thoroughly. The GB theme to an outsider may work clearer with a title link like - God's Signature or similar (or better) to see more clearly how this specifically works.

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