Hi everybody and everyone ... again back from a poetry trip, sorry for my lack of comments on your poems which I just discover now, let me settle and calm down a little bit and I'll be back soon....
Here is a picture of my screen ... I found no other way to show you the layout of this new poem ...
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19 After … Series inspired by G.Stein’s History or Messages from History
and here is the text
I must
write this so as to see it to believe it
His
tory
the way he
spelled as if gues-
sing an ethos far beyond
his genealogy god king coun-
try heritage though itage was not
his mother’s chosen Czech vocabulary
Hi story! how do you do! Once upon
and for all times dis-
connect fate
from fame
so that I
can
be
Have it all his and tory and greetings and story
and greetings, exegesis too!
ReplyDeleteYour words on the page seem like tides flowing in and out, like an aerial view of a beach (tides) and wonderfully deconstructed and reassembled to reveal gems of 'another' intelligence. Oh and humorous too... Hi story ! ;)
ReplyDeleteI really love the concrete nature of the work and agree with Jeffree - it flows visually which works perfectly with the words and their lovely Steinein deconstruction.
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