Can we envision some self-consciousness for abstract concepts
such as …. ___________
self-control for letters such as
…._________________________
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Jolted
awake H by scary tactics
as if
lightening stared down I to your face
S
THEN
O
itching
felt on the lids R
and soon the thought of a n Y
t h I n g is erased
SO
MUCH SO…
H ow to deflect emotional responses
I f nobody can afford a breakdown
aS nobody want to sink into deep scars
T
O f memory
and blathering on and on
aR e
Y
ou fooling yourself
having been part of it or not we had been mostly troublesome
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Peut-on envisager une conscience de soi dont seraient
dotés les concepts tels que…_______
du
self-control dont seraient dotées les lettres telles que ...____________
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Réveillé en sursaut
H par d’effrayantes tactiques
comme si la foudre tombait droit I sur votre visage
S
T
al O rs
démangeaison des paupières I
R
et vite n’importe quelle pensé E
est effacée
TELLEMENT …
H comment dévier les réponses émotionnelles
s I personne ne peut se permettre une
depression
alorS que personne ne veut sombrer dans une
cicaT rice profonde
de mémo
I re
et
déblatéR ant encore et encore
arrivE z-vous
à vous tromper vous-même
en y ayant pris part ou pas nous avons été avant tout pénibles
Your work (here) Béatrice is very intriguing ... I approach it from many directions like a puzzle of many parts, ideas and possible readings it seems so very cubist and thus also not 'easy' yet this is done with an admirable fresh quality. Who needs easy?
ReplyDeleteThis unfolds like a device and apart from a possible grammatical misstep at "nobody want to sink into deep scars" (ie maybe 'nobody wants to sink...) It works.
I think GS was difficult too, and a really very fine blatherer to boot! more please!
Thanks Jeffrey, I agree, it's not exactly "easy", I just try to challenge myself and Stein's spirit so as to be able to be worth her idea of "history"! I follow my momentum between rising questions(even philosophical ones) on a rational level, mixed with a flow of consciousness the more possible unconscious !!
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