tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post8283714119113121764..comments2023-06-04T17:49:10.461+10:00Comments on Project 52: Jeff Skewes #6 Silk on the Road - PreludeKit Kelenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01039514155142268468noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-66140239435416733672017-02-16T13:36:41.920+11:002017-02-16T13:36:41.920+11:00Thank you for those critical points Béatrice.
You...Thank you for those critical points Béatrice. <br />You are right, one can easily overate the truth (especially a 'truer' one). It's a simple trap so off with its head! :)<br />Your remarks and observations referencing the variants of a Pilgrims journey is invaluable too! I will amend with something clearer here soon …Jeffree Skeweshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01897170453813353795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-13827296271657023812017-02-16T06:13:02.470+11:002017-02-16T06:13:02.470+11:00Wow! the visual is really great! to my eyes and un...Wow! the visual is really great! to my eyes and understanding, the unfolding of the poem is Ok, and I can see or even hear the "prelude" you've spoken about in your introduction. What stroke my mind is about the first line: is really "true meaning" what you wanted to say? is this hidden meaning truer than others? or simply linked and related to another layer or depth or domain of "reality"? I wonder! this ""true" word is very offensive to me I must confess! As for Magdalena's remark concerning Dante and the Iliad and the Monkey ... I would say either add other references as a list (and it could be humorous, I mean offbeat humor),or just keep one because we understood from the beginning what's at stake. Béatrice MACHEThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07296584755071209068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-44289098491453563502017-02-15T12:32:27.733+11:002017-02-15T12:32:27.733+11:00Thanks Magdalena ... I see your Dante point.
I s...Thanks Magdalena ... I see your Dante point. <br /><br />I still feel uneasy regarding the momentum... Jeffree Skeweshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01897170453813353795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-78063182400525917912017-02-13T19:53:25.765+11:002017-02-13T19:53:25.765+11:00Love the visual. I think that the ending is perfe...Love the visual. I think that the ending is perfect. It’s a bit heady but I think that fits the theme. The only thing I’m not sure about is The Iliad and the Monkey. The Dante reference might be enough in one hit. Magdalena Ballhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00182314078304734996noreply@blogger.com