tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post8267761366535625105..comments2023-06-04T17:49:10.461+10:00Comments on Project 52: Nathanael O'Reilly #12 Look into the Core of My MindKit Kelenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01039514155142268468noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-89270415822905771342017-05-02T06:54:11.429+10:002017-05-02T06:54:11.429+10:00So well paced and so nicely unfolds mystetious lay...So well paced and so nicely unfolds mystetious layers. Perhap the crypic lamb is too catholic, I'm not sure...<br />Just two tiny points: try cutting 'to' from accepting and 'for' from who never gave....<br />This poem haunts quite exquisitely! :) Jeffree Skeweshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01897170453813353795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-3836534586399334022017-04-17T20:24:01.529+10:002017-04-17T20:24:01.529+10:00A villanelle, right? It’s very well managed and e...A villanelle, right? It’s very well managed and evocative, but I feel like it needs maybe one more stanza just to make sense of the blood of the lamb line which is just a bit too cryptic for a poem that’s otherwise clear(ish). Magdalena Ballhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00182314078304734996noreply@blogger.com