tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post7522655221487475837..comments2023-06-04T17:49:10.461+10:00Comments on Project 52: Béatrice Machet # 6 IT MEANS I CAN LOVEKit Kelenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01039514155142268468noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-38030996731335624222017-01-26T15:17:56.961+11:002017-01-26T15:17:56.961+11:00sublimate, sublimation, to be transformed directly...sublimate, sublimation, to be transformed directly from the solid to the gaseous state (chemistry) but also--through love, to get enoblement, to be raised to a "higher spiritual status" ( and the psychological hint of meaning is also suggested here of course, sublimation to avoid any self-destructive act for instance) .. In fact this poem can be read as the "too high" ambition and ideal of a teenager unwilling to deal with certain aspects of reality, who would be burning alive rather than accepting what he/she sees as mediocrity and compromises. Béatrice MACHEThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07296584755071209068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-10554342667671468012017-01-26T14:11:02.682+11:002017-01-26T14:11:02.682+11:00very challenging first line / opening
to get re...very challenging first line / opening <br /><br /><br />to get revenge /against what was lived as the trouble with being born<br /><br /><br />I feel I want to travel the maze of possibilities generated here <br /><br />I don't see how this ending - the sublimation - can be it <br /><br />but maybe I just don't see what it is <br />where it is<br />where that goes<br /><br />??<br />Kit Kelenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01039514155142268468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-63997997201415737282017-01-26T11:17:41.334+11:002017-01-26T11:17:41.334+11:00Thanks Jeffree! Yes I'm still thinking about s...Thanks Jeffree! Yes I'm still thinking about shaping this text, if I could have it in a kind of cornucopial pattern I might be satisfied, but easier said than done! Béatrice MACHEThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07296584755071209068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-22423622552694701922017-01-26T09:43:17.109+11:002017-01-26T09:43:17.109+11:00Love is so mysterious and provokes much to be said...Love is so mysterious and provokes much to be said and thought of. <br />I admire your interogation here.<br />I understood and enjoy your breakdown of its contradictions and conundrums...and power.<br />I wonder could this piece well benfit from a less linear device? Something circular or spiral comes to mind....but i am visually prone.Jeffree Skeweshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01897170453813353795noreply@blogger.com