tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post7475362936706364252..comments2023-06-04T17:49:10.461+10:00Comments on Project 52: Jeff Skewes #2 draft 3.Kit Kelenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01039514155142268468noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-20372824768711863372017-01-14T17:48:50.116+11:002017-01-14T17:48:50.116+11:00Thanks for reading Beatrice :) and I see you reall...Thanks for reading Beatrice :) and I see you really got the welcome aboard kind-of preface positing of this preliminary piece in this journey series. Jeffree Skeweshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01897170453813353795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-43348138069577890482017-01-14T17:29:11.040+11:002017-01-14T17:29:11.040+11:00Thanks for the thinking Kit. Their certainly on th...Thanks for the thinking Kit. Their certainly on the cards...<br />I'm still not 100percent happy with #3 and think I should try it again.Jeffree Skeweshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01897170453813353795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-8709388789636747322017-01-14T13:08:07.838+11:002017-01-14T13:08:07.838+11:00I thought it might be about a list of deities I thought it might be about a list of deities Kit Kelenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01039514155142268468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-16608692386727357792017-01-14T07:38:31.141+11:002017-01-14T07:38:31.141+11:00I definitely prefer the third version of this poem...I definitely prefer the third version of this poem, for rhythmic reasons first of all. I must confess the explanation you give helped me to understand this poem as an invitation, a “welcome aboard/ on board” kind of poem. Seen from that angle it works perfectly well to me. <br /><br />“The heaven’s not a catalogue”, in my mind, addresses and mocks travel agencies policies and ads and I like this tone of irony very much! <br /> Béatrice MACHEThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07296584755071209068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-65057473646764638902017-01-13T16:21:48.840+11:002017-01-13T16:21:48.840+11:00guess that means it's got me thinking!guess that means it's got me thinking!Kit Kelenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01039514155142268468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-43964448236071563792017-01-13T16:21:23.893+11:002017-01-13T16:21:23.893+11:00I have to confess I find this ending more puzzling...I have to confess I find this ending more puzzling every time I see itKit Kelenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01039514155142268468noreply@blogger.com