tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post4657455408421060760..comments2023-06-04T17:49:10.461+10:00Comments on Project 52: Jeff Skewes #2 BeginKit Kelenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01039514155142268468noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-49814225704251500222017-01-10T01:54:44.696+11:002017-01-10T01:54:44.696+11:00philosophy's too hard for some
for those too ...philosophy's too hard for some <br />for those too boring for a story <br />prose for those who lack poetry's spark <br /><br />as for myself<br />I believe I believe <br />I'm the heretic you burn <br />I'm the pages you set to ash Kit Kelenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01039514155142268468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-205169937859279932017-01-09T16:26:43.093+11:002017-01-09T16:26:43.093+11:00Yes. I prefer it too. The new one fairly dances al...Yes. I prefer it too. The new one fairly dances along!Rob Schacknehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09820621386743394312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-22083144857512670392017-01-09T09:28:24.371+11:002017-01-09T09:28:24.371+11:00I like the revised version much better. I think th...I like the revised version much better. I think the restructuring gives the words more space and allows the ideas to unfurl more slowly, and the changes to the diction are an improvement too.Nathanael O'Reillyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04458387905146803981noreply@blogger.com