tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post3405851550562689086..comments2023-06-04T17:49:10.461+10:00Comments on Project 52: Anna Couani Glebe poem #2 wetlandsKit Kelenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01039514155142268468noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-20205537288991176282017-01-19T02:20:20.993+11:002017-01-19T02:20:20.993+11:00I guess "bottom of the harbour" has a pa...I guess "bottom of the harbour" has a particular Australian meaning.ACskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110367021710057605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-4934253367821663822017-01-17T08:46:55.238+11:002017-01-17T08:46:55.238+11:00When reading 'wetlands' my initial impress...When reading 'wetlands' my initial impression was how it created space and dimension for me, and again the lovely movement through time and landscape. Wow - the end - and wonderful phrase - 'bottom of the harbour' takes us deep deep. Sarah St Vincent Welchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05778995457371106915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-27730659416718538442017-01-15T06:26:18.608+11:002017-01-15T06:26:18.608+11:00I think you are wrong.I think you are wrong.ACskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110367021710057605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-22190251155686930132017-01-15T04:48:44.784+11:002017-01-15T04:48:44.784+11:00I'm happy with the idea you might rewrite thes...I'm happy with the idea you might rewrite these as prose pieces and I'm looking forward to reading them, just because, to my understanding, this is already "un poème en prose" , no need for lines and breaks here, at least the way I look at it ... I may be wrong ... Béatrice MACHEThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07296584755071209068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-36079597929342060202017-01-14T21:49:26.127+11:002017-01-14T21:49:26.127+11:00Thanks Jeffree, I'm planning to rewrite these ...Thanks Jeffree, I'm planning to rewrite these as prose so together they become a kind of history, essay type of thing.ACskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110367021710057605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-23358327424259154542017-01-14T15:53:39.611+11:002017-01-14T15:53:39.611+11:00In this brief space, your Sydney narrative grows o...In this brief space, your Sydney narrative grows organically, poetry chimes, a natural and water-side urban discriptive history rolls on so nicely into the gritty realist last stanza and (comically) ironic final exit line. I really like this piece Anna :)<br />Jeffree Skeweshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01897170453813353795noreply@blogger.com