tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post3352736098858655739..comments2023-06-04T17:49:10.461+10:00Comments on Project 52: Kerri Shying R - # 8 Heat is a creature let it fall on meKit Kelenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01039514155142268468noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-25105083865944329332017-01-15T23:56:55.971+11:002017-01-15T23:56:55.971+11:00Melting creatures Kit. We have finally cooled toda...Melting creatures Kit. We have finally cooled today.Kerri Shying Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04359649587927589065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-21033234644998414202017-01-15T23:56:32.379+11:002017-01-15T23:56:32.379+11:00Yes, this is true. I am gingerly stepping on this ...Yes, this is true. I am gingerly stepping on this ground I think.Kerri Shying Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04359649587927589065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-31910706633976839952017-01-14T13:09:30.604+11:002017-01-14T13:09:30.604+11:00plenty of hot creatures in Kerri's part of the...plenty of hot creatures in Kerri's part of the world right now!Kit Kelenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01039514155142268468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-9437238121915306662017-01-14T08:12:47.458+11:002017-01-14T08:12:47.458+11:00I love the idea of heat being a creature which con...I love the idea of heat being a creature which contrasts and plays with the notion of “heat creatures”. The misadventure in itself is funny. I love the irony showing manly behaviors opposed to womanly experiences. Nevertheless I feel as if the poem wasn’t exactly finished, something that perhaps has to do with the order of “sentences” or with the condensed narrative .. … I would like to have more to read actually! Béatrice MACHEThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07296584755071209068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-64196784320409285442017-01-13T16:22:53.906+11:002017-01-13T16:22:53.906+11:00that is another poem!
and one worth writing I thin...that is another poem!<br />and one worth writing I think <br /><br />a list of demonstrations that one has gone too farKit Kelenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01039514155142268468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-35467537020194460222017-01-13T13:42:30.848+11:002017-01-13T13:42:30.848+11:00They do indeed. That light moisture you get under ...They do indeed. That light moisture you get under trees in summer, that is the wee of the cicada. They do it especially at high noon, when they sing the most loudly. You need a lot of them in a tree to feel it. It is actually pale green if you collect it. But if you collect it, life has gone too far. Kerri Shying Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04359649587927589065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3885784058796895333.post-62063313668703592082017-01-13T13:00:47.146+11:002017-01-13T13:00:47.146+11:00do they?
I suppose they must
never thought of th...do they?<br /><br />I suppose they must <br />never thought of the little buggers that way Kit Kelenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01039514155142268468noreply@blogger.com